“Despite her fat, friendly vowel-sounds, Lindsey was just the kind of skinny woman Gene didn’t like–elbows like coat hangers, a dry, desperate energy that widened her eyes.”
So many adjectives! Oh well. Write now and edit later.
“Despite her fat, friendly vowel-sounds, Lindsey was just the kind of skinny woman Gene didn’t like–elbows like coat hangers, a dry, desperate energy that widened her eyes.”
So many adjectives! Oh well. Write now and edit later.
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